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    Re: A New Story

    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Tue Aug 04, 2015 11:07 pm

    do you want to rest in here or go to an inn?
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Tue Aug 04, 2015 11:08 pm

    "A Inn?"


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Tue Aug 04, 2015 11:14 pm

    alrighty lets get going. there is one in midtown that is nice.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Tue Aug 04, 2015 11:16 pm

    "Okay...."


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Wed Aug 05, 2015 8:04 pm

    they go to midtown the middle class disctrict in betwen the low and high classes and seek out an inn.
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    "......"


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Thu Aug 06, 2015 6:39 pm

    he steps into a bed and beakfast and smiles. i want a room for two small with a private bathroom. the clerk looked at the registery and nodded. "we have two like that one is cramped th eothe ris spacious which ould you like?" i look at you "cramped please."
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    "Cramped? Are y-" "Yeah, I am..."She blinks but agrees as he paid and was given their key. The 2 follow him as he shows them their rooms which was indeed cramped. "Here you are.."


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Fri Aug 07, 2015 12:23 am

    he walks in and drops his stuff onto oen bed while she droppe dhers on the other. the door close dand he locked it.
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    "Guess we better get some rest..."She said.


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Fri Aug 07, 2015 10:32 am

    yes i agree. he says laying on his bed
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Fri Aug 07, 2015 11:24 am

    She lays down on her bed too.


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Fri Aug 07, 2015 1:15 pm

    He turns to look at her. so we dicvovered that the mountains are only the result of the war, the explosions pushed the landinto huge craters and valleys surrounded by mountyains... and the ruins survived beign the epicenter of each explosion.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Fri Aug 07, 2015 1:38 pm

    "Yes..but why? Was something there?"


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Fri Aug 07, 2015 2:33 pm

    yes, each ruin was a city during the great war. the war ended with total annialation of the cities and reset of our world.
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    "...."


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Fri Aug 07, 2015 5:01 pm

    the ruins sil remain and we can find remnants of what they were capable of
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    "Yes....."


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Aug 08, 2015 3:03 pm

    maybe we can revive the ancient technologies and rebuild the paradise before the war. I smile an dlook at you. maybe then we can settle down.


    deep underground surrounded by metal monsters and crawling bugs or robotic origin a large group of armored shadows awaken theyre red eyes glow in the dark and they gather.

    "the time has come our preparations are complete" a large bulky one says

    "those fools thought they destroyed us but only destoryed our soldiers and their world" a slithery thin one said with steam in his voice and whipping whip like arms.

    "now we will conquer this world and make it ours aqnd no one has the technology to rival us." a balanced one says who now opened his eyes and they were green

    "what of the reports of those who canabalize our technology and the enemy technology... these archeaologists." the large one asks turnign to the green eyed shadow

    "We destroy them they cannot master such technologies and their abilities are mere shadows of their original form." the green eyes one said and they melt into the shadows as moonlight filters in from opening doors and htye cvanish.
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    She smiles but agrees.


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Aug 08, 2015 3:20 pm

    after recording the history of the ruins taking a few days and distractign them form their desires they begin to move on tot he next town which had used some of the technology to make a great city and they had a vast kingdom using it. tehey welcomed foreign archeaologists and gave them a tour of the facilities their archeaologists revived
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    "....."


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Aug 08, 2015 3:34 pm

    Can you distribute this to other places to help them defend themselves. monstrs and robots are returning... thign"s are becoming dangerous in this age.

    "we can. if you can prove it."

    I will in time cmon melli we have to search for more ruins int he wilds again.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Sat Aug 08, 2015 3:35 pm

    "Right.."


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Aug 08, 2015 3:39 pm

    as they leave th ecity and eneter the wilds they were alone and it made her start to notice how much more muscled he was and how much faster they traveled together.

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