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    A New Story

    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Jan 17, 2015 8:09 pm

    in this topic Melli is a princess trapped by rules and what her father and mother want for her. they are blind to how she feels and constantly drill into her lessons on being a princess and the bore of politics and how to act how to dress and ho to even eat. and Brandon a young man who live his life on the outsirts of the city and poverty line in the middle area. he has only a small house and a large basement he dug himslef to give him more room. it was also a secret place. he was trapped by society's rules unable to gain a steady job he travels the ancient ruins scatterign the country for artifacts to clean and sell. or treasure to sell and maintain his food. he is a rugged youth always used to doing things on his own.

    monster have started returning to the lands and only archeologists could fight them with powerful weapons they find in ruins form a time where war covered the world. little is known except that one day the ancient civilization started to make weaker weapons and the tales of monsters stopped to be replaced by peace. a peace that exists to this day.

    one day the princess ran away and left the kingdom heading for the countryside. a bold young woman she was fed up with the pampering and the rules and wanted to go out and find her own path. a terrible storm forced her into some of the youngest ruins where brandon was taking shelter and reading a wall. he fire was far away form him and she couldn't see him inside so she sat by the fire to get warm and dry off. the rain was so loud she couldn't hear him mumbling as he translated the text and wrote them down in his notebook. he had been here before on a treasure run but this time he anted to learn more about this place. when he was finished he returned to the fire seeing Melli asleep and shivering form how wet she was and cold. he took away her soaked cloak and hung it up to dry removing his and covering it over her. he built up the fire and she dried off and warmed up quickly.

    when the sun rose she woke up and saw the remains of the fire and some food on a plate and half eaten food on the opposite side of the fire. she was no fool and knew the person who owned the food had given it to her and she saw her cloak and then felt his around her. looking down the hall she saw him sitting and muttering in ancient tongue and writing in his notebook. the sun sent a shaft of light all the way down the tunnel to a mirrored cavern that reflected light every where. he was at the end of the tunnel and then he started to come back. Good to see you are okay. why is a pretty girl doing out here with us monsters?

    he was talking about recent reports she overheard of monsters returning to the land but like they were always a part of life. he looked at her and she saw kindness and ferocity that rivaled her fathers and a gentlness that only her mother had. she also saw he had a sword and some guns laying near her. and far from him. he looked at her and waited for her answer. either he didn't now who she was or didn't care. she couldn't take the risk of being found out and she hid the fact she was a princess. she explained that she ran away form home after her family was attacked by monsters and found her way here when the storm chased her into the ruins. he nodded and explained who he was. "my city name is brandon but my real name is Bryant. im an archaeologist..." she cut him off in shock "really like the people who go into ruins and bring back treasures and artifacts to learn the past. and fight monsters who guard them?" she was always facinated by these tales of adventure and had a secret desire to marry one. yes thats the one. ive already cleaned this place out long ago using its treasure and artifacts to buy my home in the city but i had to come back becuase these walls tell of a time when the peace started and no one seemed to have been down here. she decided she would follow him and revealed her own sword and she put her cloak on again "im going with you. and you can't stop me." he agreed and collected the camp putting it in an ancient pack that only archaeologists have that are small but hold many things. he walked into the mirrored room and she follows. there was a sealed door at the back of this well lit room and he went over and started reading and translating the walls to learn how to open it. she leaned against the wall accidentaly opening it and they saw remains of an ancient factory. it made guns and bombs for war and weaker ones becuase the peace had started by the time it was activated. she saw remains of people and monster attacks that were not old but young. the claw marks were big enough for her to stand in and he walked in without fear. there was a huge pile of rubble ahead and as he passed it if formed into a giant stone beast. he screamed seeing it attack her and she felt a huge force shove her aside and she opened her eyes seeing him where she was and getting slashed in her place. no one had ever done that for her before her father trained her to be a warrior against people and let her take blows while her mother scolded her for getting hurt they never protected her with their bodies before. he pulled out his gun and shot the crystals on the hands and head of the beast before one breaks and it falters allowing him to run up on it and shoot the core killing it dead. he panted and dun inside of it claiming the power core that he disconnected with is shots and the bags of archaeologists that came before him. he gave her their tools and they were simple. behind this final door was a large power source that was long dead but its parts ere very valuable he took what he could carry and she blushes seeing him look at her now. he was her hero and she followed him back to the city and with renewed determination returned to the palace with a vow to see him again and told him when.

    from then on she would sneak out of the palace to meet him at the city gate and begin an adventure at night.

    one of these nights is where our story begins. she had fallen madly in love and he never seemed to notice her anymore that a close friend. as they go out to explore the ruins to the south a dar shadowed figure follows them. it was a guard sent to follow her and he saw her fawning over him and showering him with hot gazes that he didn't return. the guard was blinded by his duty to protect her and thought he saw brandon flirting with her and her returning it. he follows them to the ruins and stays hidden. she was getting better at things like fighting and in her own respect was a very good beginning archaeologist. she could go out on her own if she wanted and Bryant gave her a test this ruin she was supposed to decode and open up.
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    Re: A New Story

    Post  Silver_neko11 on Sat Jan 17, 2015 8:54 pm

    ooc:Interesting


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    Re: A New Story

    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Jan 17, 2015 8:55 pm

    OOC: its youre turn.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Sat Jan 17, 2015 9:02 pm

    "Hey, how far are we now? You said we were close and its darker."Melli was tired but catching up with him, seeing him once again writing a bit.


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    Re: A New Story

    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Jan 17, 2015 9:08 pm

    this is your test. you have to solve this ruin and beat the guardian of it all on your own. only then will i agree to take you with me on my adventures. the guard who followed them suspected bryant of kidnapping and returns to the palace to tell the king and queen that it was "brandon" who took her away and he was going to tae her to the ruins around the world and never let her come back.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Sat Jan 17, 2015 9:20 pm

    "Find him and bring him here with our daughter!"The king was angry while his wife was sad. Melli blinks but she looks at him. "Really?"


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Jan 17, 2015 9:25 pm

    Yes this is your final test to become a real archaeologist. i will go out and buy you a liscense and then present it to you when you pass.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Sat Jan 17, 2015 9:44 pm

    "Well, okay.."


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Jan 17, 2015 9:46 pm

    use your training and solve this place an dthen beat the guardian an dyou ill pass your test.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Sat Jan 17, 2015 10:05 pm

    "Where?"


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Jan 17, 2015 10:14 pm

    figure it out he said sitting down and letting her explore the ruin.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Sat Jan 17, 2015 10:28 pm

    She thinks, looking.


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Jan 17, 2015 10:30 pm

    she saw the symbols and understood them form her lessons and she was better at translating than him. she saw the answer wasn't on the walls or the door but she also new the name of the architect was and he laways had a pattern for his locks.
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    "Patterns..Patterns..."She thinks but checks a wall again.


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Jan 17, 2015 10:45 pm

    as she touched the wall she say a crac that as too straight to be a natural stress and it streched up and cured down just llike tyhe firstt ruin she was in
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    She saw, brushing some dirt away but quickly sees a stone relic.


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sat Jan 17, 2015 11:08 pm

    it was a hexagon shape and she saw it was hard to push and she dusted out the crack and tried again and it opened.
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    "Wow..."


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sun Jan 18, 2015 7:26 pm

    this was another factory but it made metals he stood up and walked with her into the factory and like before at the bac was a contruct to protect it . this one as made of metal not stone and it was almost the same its core was not in its head but its torso and the control crystals were on its knees and shoulders.
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    "........"


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sun Jan 18, 2015 10:26 pm

    it leaps at he rot attack and he stays out of it becuase this is her final test.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Sun Jan 18, 2015 10:52 pm

    She battles them.


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Sun Jan 18, 2015 10:54 pm

    her shots bounce off it and one lucy one hits a control crystal and makes it flinch telling her how to beat it.
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    Post  Silver_neko11 on Wed Jan 21, 2015 9:58 am

    She tries aiming to destroy it.


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    Post  Brandon Maboroshi on Wed Jan 21, 2015 5:54 pm

    the contruct stumbles and exposes its core.

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